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Aurora
Jun 5, 2008 21:19:49 GMT -5
Post by bry on Jun 5, 2008 21:19:49 GMT -5
Name: Aurora Age: 1 Gender: Female Species Timber Wolf Pack: Kazz'can Personality: A misunderstood beauty. She is rough and mean on the outside, and hides the fact that she can be kind. Her heart longs for the day she meets her true love, but until then she is a rose covered in thorns. Appearance: She was thick-furred and white with strange black and brown markings on her fur. History: Born into an unforgiving pack, her parents were the betas. But they were thrown out of the pack, along with her and her brother. One day when she and her brother were three months old, they were capture by the two leggeds and taken to a laboratory to be used as lab rats. Soon, their parents were killed for their fur coats. So her and her brother remained.
At 11 months, they broke out and ran away in opposite directions. She knows she'll find him again someday, and every night when she goes to sleep, she dreams of Kodi, her lost brother.
A month later she came across her packs territory, and that's it for now.
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Jade
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Aurora
Jun 6, 2008 16:43:38 GMT -5
Post by Jade on Jun 6, 2008 16:43:38 GMT -5
I like the basis of the history, but it needs to be spruced up. The personality and appearance should be 2 paragraphs long with 5 sentences each or more. The history should be 3 paragraphs with 10 sentences each. I know you can do it!
Also, you are supposed to post loner instead of a pack, unless your pup was born to parents in that pack, and currently, there are no pups to be adopted or played.
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